Meaning: we can overlook a lot when we love someone . Use examples.
Rewrite 1: love sees few blemishes
Rewrite 2: one loves what love sees
Rewrite 3: many are ugly but for the love that blinds the acquaintance
Rewrite 4: seeing past imperfections2 is love’s greatest gift
Comment: This one takes some finesse to speak eloquently without burdening credibility.
More reading about clichés
What I found when I googled “clichés”:
• Eliminate Clichés: “Underlined and italicized phrases and words…”
Note: By providing links to other websites I am only showing you what is out there about clichés – I am not endorsing any content or opinion expressed there.
Check out the searchable alphabetical list of all my cliché rewrites available in the archive list at the right.
Wednesday, March 08, 2006
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