Meaning: cool and calm. Meanings and mentions.
Rewrite 1: cool as a frosty mug
Rewrite 2: cool as a springtime morning
Rewrite 3: calm and quiet like a sleeping toddler
Rewrite 4: the calm demeanor of a cucumber
Comment: I’m struggling here between creating metaphors and imagining similes that truly fit the original mind’s image. To restate the cliché with a different vegetable likely won’t improve the comparison.
More reading about clichés
What I found when I googled “clichés”:
• Dead People Server: Cliché obituary page.
Note: By providing links to other websites I am only showing you what is out there about clichés – I am not endorsing any content or opinion expressed there.
Check out the searchable alphabetical list of all my cliché rewrites available in the archive list at the right.
Friday, March 31, 2006
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