Meaning: reach a valued goal. Definition and mentions.
Rewrite 1: striketv16a a gold vein6
Rewrite 2: mint silver
Rewrite 3: deliveriv1 coin
Rewrite 4: take downtv3 a piñata full of diamonds
Rewrite 5: hittv6c CEO pay
Rewrite 6: mineiv1a the mother load1
Comment: I overdid myself, but in doing so I hope I demonstrated that there are many ways to say the same thing.
More reading about clichés
What I found when I googled “clichés”:
• Confessions of an Idiosyncratic Mind: “Gimmicks, like cliches, reveal a lack of craft or imagination, or sometimes downright,” by a writer of crime fiction.
Friday, December 16, 2005
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