Monday, October 03, 2005

Cliché: welcome to the club

Meaning: you aren’t alone
Rewrite 1: welcome to our side
Rewrite 2: you’re part of a crowd
Rewrite 3: membership to that club isn’t exclusive

Comment: I wrote these on a Monday morning after a long weekend, so my brain is operating on small wattage. Maybe you have some more suggestions?

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