(entered for 03.29.06)
Meaning: extra time is available. Use examples.
Rewrite 1: minutes are running slow
Rewrite 2: all that time yet, with not much to do
Rewrite 3: the train’s on time but the clock is slow
Rewrite 4: time advances slowly, but my progress does not
Comment: Let’s advance the clock and get beyond this one.
More reading about clichés
What I found when I googled “clichés”:
• Poynter Online – from “Special” to Substantial: Avoiding clichés as you write about people with disabilities.”
Note: By providing links to other websites I am only showing you what is out there about clichés – I am not endorsing any content or opinion expressed there.
Check out the searchable alphabetical list of all my cliché rewrites available in the archive list at the right.
Wednesday, March 29, 2006
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