Tuesday, November 02, 2010

Cliché: high maintenance

Meaning: needs a lot of care/attention (example 1, example 2)

Rewrite 1: High steady-state rate
Rewrite 2: High keeping-up-with-the-Joneses mantra
Rewrite 3: Max-out-the-cards care
Rewrite 4: Major wallet-drain pain
Rewrite 5: 24-karat spending habit 

Comment: At first, I had trouble with this one. I was on the verge of putting it off for another time, when I suddenly found my stride. 

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