Meaning: a beautiful woman (example)
Rewrite 1: a beauty brain freeze
Rewrite 2: an EMP (Eyes Might Pop-out)
Rewrite 3: a power outage
Rewrite 4: a lines-down and lights-out
Rewrite 5: an E-EFFEN-5!
Rewrite 6: a femme fatality
Comment: It was hard to write something that knocks you out without being a negative, which the original clearly is not.
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