Meaning: go to bed (example)
Rewrite 1: hit the bale
Rewrite 2: hit the mattress
Rewrite 3: cuddle with the pillows
Rewrite 4: ruffle the linens
Rewrite 5: snuggle in z's
Rewrite 6: join the bed buds
Comment: I went for more colloquial wording here.
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Monday, December 13, 2010
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