Rewrite: gulp hot coffee
Rewrite: dive into boiling water
Rewrite: skinny dip in a scalding pool
Rewrite: ride some white water
Rewrite: cross a river at a deep spot
Comment: There are lots of ways to use water as a metaphor for getting into trouble and I've attempted to use some of them here.
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How they might say it at sea
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