Meaning: it won’t work. Use examples.
Rewrite 1: it’s got no wingsn8b
Rewrite 2: it won’t make it off the ground
Rewrite 3: it might look like a boat, but it won’t float
Rewrite 4: it lacks the means to “get up and go”
Comment: You could give this metaphor a hammer and some nails, but it won’t build a house. I’ve tried to provide several iterations to keep it from being just about flying.
More reading about clichés
What I found when I googled “clichés”:
• Christian Science Monitor: “Finally: A Sept. 11 story without the clichés.”
Note: By providing links to other websites I am only showing you what is out there about clichés – I am not endorsing any content or opinion expressed there.
Check out the searchable alphabetical list of all my cliché rewrites available in the archive list at the right.
Sunday, April 02, 2006
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It mustn't be a falcon.
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