Meaning: focus on something more worthwhile (example)
Rewrite 1: get a new hobby
Rewrite 2: find a different obsession
Rewrite 3: joust with a different windmill
Rewrite 4: dude, read a book, play a game, go into a coma, but drop this, okay?
Rewrite 5: Obi-Wan says, "This isn't the cause you were looking for...move along!"
Comment: This cliché is usually a put down, so I rewrote with that in mind.
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Sunday, May 30, 2010
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