Example: First he
offered me free tickets to the movies, then he pulled a bait and switch and
offered me full-price tickets to the opera.
Rewrites:
- carrot and stick
- dangle and tangle
- deal and steal
- promise and pretense
Discussion: The original was pretty descriptive, but with a
little imagination we can re-establish some of the feeling of having the deal
ripped away from you. I also recognize that “carrot and stick” can be a cliché,
but it’s usually a metaphor for reward and punishment, not for breaking a deal,
so I think we can reuse it here effectively.
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