Example: A
good fence often keeps bad blood between neighbors from escalating into a good
war.
Rewrites:
- foul blood
- tainted blood
- bile in the blood
- vein hatred
- ill tempered muscle
- fury in the guts
Discussion: I have tried to rework both the concept of emotion
and where that emotion resides.
1 comment:
Something to nauseaste a vampire.
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