Meaning: someone lacking grace or refinement or with unpolished talent (example 1, example 2)
Rewrite 1: unbeveled diamond, an
Rewrite 2: unpolished stone, an
Rewrite 3: unvarnished oak
Rewrite 4: unchiseled granite
Rewrite 5: unsculpted marble
Rewrite 6: unrefined cotton
Comments: I went much further with this recasting than I thought I initially could. I'll bet there's even more you could accomplish.
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Friday, April 16, 2010
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