Meaning: superstitious act to avoid bad luck (example)
Rewrite 1: fist bump wood
Rewrite 2: high-five a tree
Rewrite 3: bonk an oak
Rewrite 4: knuckle a plank
Rewrite 5: back-hand some veneer
Rewrite 6: slap some ash
Comment: Not sure if in superstition these substitutions would be seen to work in the place of actually knocking on wood with your knuckles, but it would certainly work to freshen the language.
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Friday, December 02, 2011
Tuesday, July 17, 2007
Cliché: can’t see the forest for the trees
Meaning: can’t see the whole for observing the details
Rewrite 1: can’t see the garden for the flowers
Rewrite 2: can’t see the street for the traffic
Rewrite 3: can’t see the home for the house plan
Rewrite 4: missing the curve for the plot points
Comment: I threw you a curve with the last rewrite.
Check out the searchable alphabetical list of my cliché rewrites with the archive list at the right.
Rewrite 1: can’t see the garden for the flowers
Rewrite 2: can’t see the street for the traffic
Rewrite 3: can’t see the home for the house plan
Rewrite 4: missing the curve for the plot points
Comment: I threw you a curve with the last rewrite.
Check out the searchable alphabetical list of my cliché rewrites with the archive list at the right.
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