Meaning: is it ready? (example)
Rewrite 1: soup poured?
Rewrite 2: done cookin'?
Rewrite 3: table set yet?
Rewrite 4: still in the oven?
Rewrite 5: pie still cooling?
Comment: I've maintained the food or eating metaphor, but there should be plenty of others you could use. For instance, building: Walls up? Decorating: Paint dry? Programming: Code up?
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Showing posts with label how to rewrite a cliche. Show all posts
Showing posts with label how to rewrite a cliche. Show all posts
Friday, February 18, 2011
Wednesday, February 16, 2011
Cliché: skating on thin ice
Meaning: taking a big risk (example)
Rewrite: swimming in deep waters
Rewrite: walking on ice
Rewrite: upstaging a diva
Rewrite: running with scissors
Rewrite: skipping a stiff rope
Comment: This cliché was the suggestion of Jacques. Thanks, Jacques! I tried to come up with different risky scenarios without sounding too rediculous.
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Rewrite: swimming in deep waters
Rewrite: walking on ice
Rewrite: upstaging a diva
Rewrite: running with scissors
Rewrite: skipping a stiff rope
Comment: This cliché was the suggestion of Jacques. Thanks, Jacques! I tried to come up with different risky scenarios without sounding too rediculous.
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Friday, February 11, 2011
Cliché: in your dreams
Meaning: a challenge of disbelief (example)
Rewrite: in your mind's eye
Rewrite: in the world of make-believe
Rewrite: as the fantasy flies
Rewrite: with your imaginary friends
Rewrite: when you're on meds
Comment: This is usually said as a taunt, so think more in terms of sarcasm.
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Rewrite: in your mind's eye
Rewrite: in the world of make-believe
Rewrite: as the fantasy flies
Rewrite: with your imaginary friends
Rewrite: when you're on meds
Comment: This is usually said as a taunt, so think more in terms of sarcasm.
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Wednesday, February 09, 2011
Cliché: in the nick of time
Meaning: just in time (example)
Rewrite 1: in the tick of a tock
Rewrite 2: before the zeroes clicked over
Rewrite 3: before the bell buzzed
Rewrite 4: before a spark becomes a flame
Rewrite 5: before he could hit "send"
Comment: The last couple of examples are more moments than time, yet I think they equally apply.
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Rewrite 1: in the tick of a tock
Rewrite 2: before the zeroes clicked over
Rewrite 3: before the bell buzzed
Rewrite 4: before a spark becomes a flame
Rewrite 5: before he could hit "send"
Comment: The last couple of examples are more moments than time, yet I think they equally apply.
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Tuesday, February 08, 2011
Cliché: in the hot seat
Meaning: difficult position (example)
Rewrite: in the frying pan
Rewrite: in the flood plain
Rewrite: in a war zone
Rewrite: on the nail head
Rewrite: over an open manhole
Rewrite: holding a live wire
Comment: I tried to not just concentrate on "hot" situations, but also included difficult circumstances.
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Words of conflict
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Rewrite: in the frying pan
Rewrite: in the flood plain
Rewrite: in a war zone
Rewrite: on the nail head
Rewrite: over an open manhole
Rewrite: holding a live wire
Comment: I tried to not just concentrate on "hot" situations, but also included difficult circumstances.
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Words of conflict
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Monday, February 07, 2011
Cliché: in the clear
Meaning: blameless or innocent (example 1)(example 2)
Rewrite 1: passed clean suspect inspection
Rewrite 2: traveling barrier-free
Rewrite 3: the fog surrounding you has lifted
Rewrite 4: the dark cloud hovering over you just rained out
Rewrite 5: the trash talk has shifted to somebody else
Comment: There is an other use for this idiom related to cashflow, but all the references I found online were to blamelessness.
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Rewrite 1: passed clean suspect inspection
Rewrite 2: traveling barrier-free
Rewrite 3: the fog surrounding you has lifted
Rewrite 4: the dark cloud hovering over you just rained out
Rewrite 5: the trash talk has shifted to somebody else
Comment: There is an other use for this idiom related to cashflow, but all the references I found online were to blamelessness.
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Sunday, February 06, 2011
Cliché: in the cards, it's
Meaning: predicatble (example, scroll down), predicted (example)
Rewrite: Swami has fortold it
Rewrite: I found it in the Bible Code
Rewrite: you will find it in the star charts
Rewrite: I knew it! I could have run the table on it!
Rewrite: it was known before they shuffled the cards
Comment: This is more about foreknowledge than predictability.
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Rewrite: Swami has fortold it
Rewrite: I found it in the Bible Code
Rewrite: you will find it in the star charts
Rewrite: I knew it! I could have run the table on it!
Rewrite: it was known before they shuffled the cards
Comment: This is more about foreknowledge than predictability.
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